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I resonate with this on a personal level haha

Submitted on Wed, June 6th, 2018 1:51am

I think this does an excellent job of making a vivid and abstract description of the painting. Good job!

Submitted on Tue, June 5th, 2018 10:51pm

It's a very pretty poem but the rhythm is choppy at parts. Specifically, the lines "Write me a fairy tale where I want to be" and "What's the worst that can happen by taking this leap?" really break the flow of the stanzas because they have just a little too many syllables in it. But as I said, it's still a very pretty poem.

Submitted on Tue, June 5th, 2018 10:42pm

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