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It is good to see your poetry back though it is depressed and melancholic. I guess it is to be read by the adresee where every word echoes for her. I am not a big fan of romantic poems because they are private emotions for two lovers only. As usual your structure is good and organized regardless the scrambled emotions.
Submitted on Sun, November 17th, 2013 4:31pm
Well written as all your work. The ironical thing about life is that those we love make a good object of writing poetry and after their departure oops a masterpiece might be detected :D
Submitted on Fri, November 15th, 2013 3:29pm
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Hello. Please can you read and comment on my novel, poetry or script and I'll comment your back. Thanks You.
Good afternoon. I have posted a new short story called 'In The Box Beneath Her Bed'. Could you mind checking it out, and leave a comment? I will do the same for you! Thank you.
hey i wish if you could read my poem 'mother tree' and leave your genuine opinion.
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Follow The Light - Chapter 1 - Follow The Light
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The music is so vivid in here. Dark and musical. Good job.
Submitted on Fri, January 3rd, 2014 3:16pm