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Not really liking the poem, honestly. No real flow to it, no spirit. No emotion conveyed, no real emotion trying to be invoked. Feels just like words, not thoughts. I understand the atmosphere of nothingness and ennui you were trying to convey, and you may have done it too well, if that makes any sense. I may be in the minority here, as I can see f... Read More

Submitted on Tue, December 7th, 2010 6:07am

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Whoa. This poem hits me pretty hard. Not because I resonate with the "speaker" of the poem, but the person they "speak" about. I know how it is to have my feelings ignored by another only to have her come back for love after those feelings have fleeted. Very well written, very nice flow.

Submitted on Tue, November 30th, 2010 11:51pm

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Hmm, its simple, but I like it.

Submitted on Sat, October 17th, 2009 7:27am

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