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Engaging story + skillful rhyming = great poem! I especially like these lines: Mind and heart in me now quarrel/Orders and conciense fight/Lord Lord this can't be right...and the last two lines. I think you've really captured the inner conflict that I'm sure most soldiers have to deal with...and also the hope for the future.

Submitted on Fri, May 29th, 2009 4:16pm

by Baz

I really enjoyed reading this poem - you really "caught" the spirit of young children, their inquisitiveness...and their quick-to-move-on mannerisms! As mom to an energetic daughter I can really relate to this.

Submitted on Fri, May 29th, 2009 4:07pm

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