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by KatV

This was a cute story to read, and I like how the two characters got together in the end. Their friendship is well illustrated in their dialogue, and it makes them secretly being in love with each other believable. I also liked the imagery you used in the first paragraph because it gives your main character a strong voice. However, I was confused b... Read More

Submitted on Mon, November 30th, 2020 7:35pm

This was definitely a "freaky" story as the title suggests, but I love the creativity you used to combine multiple prompts into one story. I understand why the dandelion's a big deal, but why is the wall seen as an obstacle when Ryan pretty easily moves between the field and city twice in two days? Just a minor thing, but I wonder if maybe giving a... Read More

Submitted on Sat, October 3rd, 2020 12:02am

by shika

I like the unique spin you took on the prompt and how you address the desire children have to see good in the world versus the apathy of adults. It was very interesting to read.

Submitted on Fri, October 2nd, 2020 11:53pm

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