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For me it's a little controversial because I as a teenager have contemplated suicide many times, and my sister as a teenager attempted suicide multiple times. I loved the poem but it is a little racy and controversial and could possibly be a trigger for some suicidal people. Lovely poem though! XOXO, S.J.

Submitted on Tue, November 27th, 2012 1:26pm

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Loved it! The twist was very unexpected but very cool. I was a little confused at first but when I looked back I understood it LOL. Please check out some of my work and tell me what you think! XOXO, S.J.

Submitted on Mon, November 26th, 2012 6:16pm

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Your writing is really simplistic and could use some more detail. I would advise using some different words because you reuse the same words a lot. It had an all right plot though. Just need to work a little on your written expression and usage/mechanics.

Submitted on Thu, November 1st, 2012 2:36pm

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