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Not bad, but way over the top with the description. You don't need to use a thesaurus, you should just use words that feel natural! Like the first sentence is a good one, subdued is a good word choice. But does the nostalgia infest the body like a parasite? That seems too aggressive. Really, just watch your diction and write what you're comfortable... Read More

Submitted on Thu, September 12th, 2013 7:42pm

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Best thing I've read on here.

Submitted on Thu, September 12th, 2013 7:27pm

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First of all, awful poem. There is no rhythm, and all the words are simplistic and shallow. There's no imagery, and the entire poem is simply statements. No metaphors, and no literary devices. It's not very good. Secondly, boo-hoo-hoo. Poor baby Amanda Todd. You know, I really hate reading stories that try to make me feel like a terrible perso... Read More

Submitted on Mon, October 15th, 2012 11:05am

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