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To begin, I love the simplicity of this chapter and the way it so quickly and smoothly fills in an idea of what's going on. As the featured review states, I can definitely see this story being fit for teenagers off the bat. However, the simplicity is also a double-edged sword. I think in the beginning, while the hook is definitely interesting, i... Read More

Submitted on Thu, November 12th, 2020 3:37pm

As promised, here I am! In any case, I'll cut to the chase. I see what you're trying to execute. Reina is a person who seems to be unsatisfied with life. She doesn't want to be with Kosuke. Her decisions are practically made for her, albeit there's some leniency, such as letting her find her own suitor. Honestly, based on the names and the way y... Read More

Submitted on Thu, November 12th, 2020 3:18pm

I actually really liked the old English style! I think the word "joke" may be a bit out of place although I see it was meant to rhyme with cloak, I just imagined it to be like "But thee might think it in jest" you know to keep up with the old English, but overall really solid and simple!

Submitted on Wed, August 12th, 2020 2:01am

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