jack lafountain Activity

jack lafountain's Posted Comments

avatar

In response to your request, what do you think of this possible first paragraph? The balcony opened onto a room of endless darkness impenetrable by wind or sun. Purin sat at the head of long table in a chair craved with his name by a master smith; Purin Luminai, Prince of Light. He looked across the marble floor at the golden walls hung with d... Read More

Submitted on Sun, August 5th, 2018 8:52pm

avatar

Is this a chapter to a larger story? I got lost in your descriptions. There were a lot of words that added nothing to the image you wanted to create. The story as is doesn't take me anywhere.

Submitted on Sat, August 4th, 2018 4:11pm

avatar

Wow, great essay. I'm from the Seattle area and it's nice to hear a Democratic voice that isn't screeching rabid hatred. I'm a lifelong Republican who didn't vote for Trump. (I was a Dr. Carson supporter.) However, I share his anti-globalist views. Thanks for a little sanity. People should be able to disagree without trying to destroy each other in... Read More

Submitted on Wed, July 25th, 2018 12:19am

View All jack lafountain's Comments →

jack lafountain's Recommended Shelf on Booksie

This is a library of postings and books that jack lafountain has read from Booksie.com.

jack lafountain's recommended Booksie Shelf is empty.

jack lafountain's Quickees

 
 
 

Please write below a quickee for this writer.

This is where you can leave a short message for the writer. All Quickees are public. To leave a private message, use the private messaging system.

View All jack lafountain's Quickees →

Booksie 2020 Flash Fiction Writing Contest

jack lafountain is a member of: