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The story was great, very moving. I loved the characters and the dialogue was perfect, I can just picture it, both are very well written. A thing to note however, you seem to switch between past and present tense a lot. One line it's 'she said', the next it is 'she says', this can be very bothersome and confusing when reading a story, you might ... Read More

Submitted on Thu, October 4th, 2012 1:34pm

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A beautiful piece. 'But in death I will not enter heaven's gate ... Will god be blind to their confessions?' I loved this part especially, an eternal wonder for all the soldiers sacrifices, was it worth it, and at the gates of heaven, what will come of them, what will they say?

Submitted on Thu, October 4th, 2012 1:21pm

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Sorry, I was to fast! I have also reviewed 'Carver (1)' from Nick Edward. That was a very interesting piece to read, to much symbolism for me, but I imagine, a lot of emotion for some, recommended read if that is your thing. The above still stands, I would prefer 'Fight Where We Must' reviewed, or my poem. Thanks.

Submitted on Wed, October 3rd, 2012 2:37pm

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