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For someone who just decided that I'm going to inlist in the Navy, I don't really connect with the poetry but I do understand it.

Submitted on Fri, October 4th, 2013 8:53pm

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This is great. I know as a writer I love criticism from other writers so I try to dish it out too, but I can't find anything to really say about your poem other then the fact is was really great. :) -Jay

Submitted on Fri, October 4th, 2013 9:12am

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This is cute. It's a great poem and I like your ability to rhyme and flow, but it is cute.

Submitted on Fri, October 4th, 2013 9:09am

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