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This definitely has potential. I wasn't expecting Giovanni to be a zombie. I thought he was just a vitctim of mindless prejudiced wankers. Keep writing. Would you mind checking out my two short stories and let me know what you think?

Submitted on Sat, September 19th, 2009 2:20pm

I really like this. I love the simplicity and directness of your style. The characters are well drawn and I always wanted know more. I do agree with one of the guys who commented earlier about certain things not needing to be there/repeated (the phone call to her mum going over Lucas' excuse). Other than that it is very good. I want to read more.

Submitted on Sat, September 19th, 2009 1:32pm

Simply, I liked this very much. I look forward to reading more of your stuff.

Submitted on Fri, September 18th, 2009 10:33pm

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