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I like it. Although I think if you wove more metaphors and took out the rhyme it would be more profound. Contrary to popular belief poems do not have to rhyme to sound good. I love the emotion you put into it.

Submitted on Mon, July 17th, 2017 12:03am

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If I had a dollar for every time someone said they would be there and they weren't. I would be pretty wealthy. I like your poem though. Follow through on that promise because, seriously, to all of the people that make that promise and don't keep it, it hurts. People need people so be there.

Submitted on Sun, July 16th, 2017 1:49pm

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You know. I feel the same. Like the world wants to take and take until I'm empty on the inside. And that's all it's done is take and take but then it gave me love and I held on even when the world tried to take it. I held on for a year. I've held on for six. Sometimes it takes a little strength, a little faith. If I have learned anything about hear... Read More

Submitted on Sun, July 16th, 2017 1:37pm

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