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Counting Sheep

What I like about it jctolliver, it’s relatable, and flows smoothly. I’m glad you get a break during the day. I’m sorry you experience this.

Submitted on Mon, November 18th, 2019 3:55am

Cookie Cutters

Chapter 1 - Cookie Cutters

I enjoyed the metaphors. They show your creativity. I like how you open it with the heart shape for lungs and star for chest. The ending was interesting. How you said you want to change form. Is that true in real life? Or were you just trying to keep with the cookie cutter theme? Either way, well done. I read on your profile you want to enter a pie... Read More

Submitted on Tue, October 13th, 2015 6:02am

Eyes in the Night

Chapter 1 - Eyes in the Night

Your descriptions are good. The creature, Kilko seemed like it would we frightening to come in contact with. I liked the way you introduced the "rock hopper." Nice ending with darkness on the Ave. Good job Hope.

Submitted on Wed, August 26th, 2015 8:07pm


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