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I enjoyed the metaphors. They show your creativity. I like how you open it with the heart shape for lungs and star for chest. The ending was interesting. How you said you want to change form. Is that true in real life? Or were you just trying to keep with the cookie cutter theme? Either way, well done. I read on your profile you want to enter a pie... Read More

Submitted on Mon, October 12th, 2015 11:02pm

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Your descriptions are good. The creature, Kilko seemed like it would we frightening to come in contact with. I liked the way you introduced the "rock hopper." Nice ending with darkness on the Ave. Good job Hope.

Submitted on Wed, August 26th, 2015 1:07pm

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The reputation worked well. The last stanza is my favorite and the last line added a punch to the poem. Well written in a way that is relatable to others. Keep rocking!

Submitted on Fri, August 21st, 2015 8:59am

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