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Keep Running

Chapter 7

okay- really complicated. maybe im just extremely slow, or didnt read careful enough (actually that's probabtly it)... dont get it. it's not extremely catchy. i like the idea of your other novel better, the rush or rush, i like the prologue, you should follow up

Submitted on Wed, December 23rd, 2009 2:15am

Last Kiss

Chapter 1 - Last Kiss

you should have made three stamina's, maybe one last little short one saying 'alone nowhere to go' so then you could have the good times together and the bad times together, like a pattern instead of just jumbled. good job otherwise, and true too, realistic makes it good.

Submitted on Wed, December 23rd, 2009 2:11am

Keep Running

Chapter 1 - Keep Running


Submitted on Tue, November 17th, 2009 6:36pm

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