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This just oozes style and really cements such a bittersweet tone, mixing pleasant imagery with gradually more faded imagery, and by the end - as a result - you've really immersed your readers in some powerful feelings.

Submitted on Sun, April 10th, 2016 8:49pm

I really like how this gradually builds and builds in intensity as it goes on and the message is clear and effective. I also think the simple repetition of "How dare you!" is actually quite powerful because I can almost imagine it being said in the voice of some parental figure disciplining a child, which makes those individuals that you're calling... Read More

Submitted on Sun, April 10th, 2016 8:45pm

I think this is quite strong, and I always say that being able to get across a strong effect in a short piece takes some talent. The last line in particular makes the reader think about their own keepsakes from their lives, which is what lends this piece its power in my opinion. You're pretty good.

Submitted on Sun, April 10th, 2016 8:40pm

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