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New York City Hypogeographies

Chapter 7 - Howard and Ian

Sorry, I seem to have posted it twice and I don't know how to delete it...

Submitted on Sun, November 29th, 2020 9:10pm

New York City Hypogeographies

Chapter 7 - Howard and Ian

Well, I liked this chapter a lot better than the fourth one. It has a better flow and less empty words. I really like the fact that they're talking about Ian becoming an escort. That would be interesting for a robot I think. The only tip I can give you with this text is still looking for 'empty' words that are not relevant and can be easily... Read More

Submitted on Sun, November 29th, 2020 9:09pm

New York City Hypogeographies

Chapter 7 - Howard and Ian

Well, I liked this chapter a lot better than the fourth one. It has a better flow and less empty words. I really like the fact that they're talking about Ian becoming an escort. That would be interesting for a robot I think. The only tip I can give you with this text is still looking for 'empty' words that are not relevant and can be easily... Read More

Submitted on Sun, November 29th, 2020 9:09pm


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