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Submitted on Sun, November 29th, 2020 9:10pm

Well, I liked this chapter a lot better than the fourth one. It has a better flow and less empty words. I really like the fact that they're talking about Ian becoming an escort. That would be interesting for a robot I think. The only tip I can give you with this text is still looking for 'empty' words that are not relevant and can be easily... Read More

Submitted on Sun, November 29th, 2020 9:09pm

Well, I liked this chapter a lot better than the fourth one. It has a better flow and less empty words. I really like the fact that they're talking about Ian becoming an escort. That would be interesting for a robot I think. The only tip I can give you with this text is still looking for 'empty' words that are not relevant and can be easily... Read More

Submitted on Sun, November 29th, 2020 9:09pm

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