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I usually sit down and read one or two of these and theyre not really good cause of spelling and grammar and structure and everything but this was a cool story and worth it
Submitted on Mon, June 22nd, 2009 11:45am
by Beavis92
Cool story and its short and simple, no waffling on about false hope...love the imagery and how its put together
Submitted on Mon, June 15th, 2009 5:44pm
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big changes are happening to drake.come see whats going on in the latest chapter of anything wrong (sry it took me so long to write ive just been busy)
Hi! I am ember I was wondering if you would like to check out some of my works here is a brief over view of two main stories I am working on right now.
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Darkness: Eras beginning(excerpt)
The sour smell day old ale filled my nose as the floor made contact with my already sore face. Damn this , damn this to hell!I thought looking bitterly up at my "mistress".
"You! You stupid girl! You dare to insult one of the customers!" Mistress Pryhall screeched hauling me up by the collar and slamming my head into the wall. Stars broke out in my vision leaving a wave of nausea. "Have you not learned your place yet?!"
I looked warily up into her eyes, not moving to get up or defend myself. This wasn’t the first time I had gotten the stuffing knocked out of me. Bravery was a stupid thing that could kill you in this place. Most of the time, if you gave her no reaction she would lose interest and move on to her next poor victim.
“Well,” says Mistress Pry hall impatiently. “You’ll just have to make amends for your folly."I froze at her words. Make amends? A quick glance at her cold eyes sent shivers down my spine. Before I could move she grabbed me by the collar.A wicked smile flooded her face, “I think it’s time you see what real work is like."
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DRAMA CRISIS!
AMEI is new director and trying to come up with an original production that will knock the pants off her rivals now the only problem stands between her and her goals is a rowdy group of misfit actors that have been put under her charge. Will her able able to get them to overcome their differences or will things spiral out of control. LIGHTS! CAMMERA! ACTION!
Hey. Coolkidrox123 has a super duper competition, I think you should go check it out http://www.booksie.com/other/miscellaneous/coolkidrox123/my-first-rounds-competition/chapter/1
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At the Edge of the World - Chapter 1 - At the Edge of the World
by SilentWordsSpeakMore
I enjoyed how you blended different people's living conditions and situations and condensed them to their last moments. A good read but there could have been a lot more substance and volume to each story rather than writing a paragraph for each one. Other than that you didn't waste my time at all. Thanks for the read.
Submitted on Wed, January 26th, 2011 9:59am