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A Bunch of Serpents

Chapter 1 - A Bunch of Serpents

Hi Mako here, i liked your poem very descriptive. Short but holds a lot of meaning. I really liked it i which i can write poetry like this it would go good with my story

Submitted on Mon, March 5th, 2012 3:02pm

The Grey Wolf

Chapter 1 - The Grey Wolf

It put me in mind of being the wolf stalking his pray it reminds me of a movie with some skiers

Submitted on Wed, January 11th, 2012 2:34am

Lion Spirit

Chapter 1 - Lion Spirit

Sounds good so far, you should start a new paragraph when you talk about a different character. It makes it easier but other than that i like it. :)

Submitted on Sun, December 11th, 2011 4:35am

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