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I typically despise sappy love poetry, but there was a certain sentiment that partially had me throughout the stanzas. A solid, if I were to attribute to it a numbered evaluation, 5/10. What this poem lacks is originality, and it's particularly offensive to begin your poem with a tired cliche such as 'looking up at the same sky.' I understand n... Read More

Submitted on Sun, November 18th, 2018 3:01pm

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I enjoyed the meshing of popular science and relationship, though this reads a lot like a pop song. Perhaps this was your intent. The line: "There would exist a Universe for every choice I didn't make/ (for every choice I was not allowed to make)" is especially resonating and impacting.

Submitted on Sun, November 18th, 2018 2:54pm

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Here's the only negative review you'll get, so brace yourself. It's not personal, nor does it arise from bitterness, but I have some thoughts to share. The breeziness with which you write certainly calls up a smile, but none of this strikes me as particularly insightful or interesting. You say that 'all is beautiful,' but this sentiment is shallow ... Read More

Submitted on Sun, November 18th, 2018 2:48pm

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