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As I have said before your way of describing, painting a picture is lovely, I feel very much in the scene. I will look forward to the next chapter. Hope you are enjoying writting it as much as I am reading it.

Submitted on Thu, August 30th, 2007 11:14pm

I had to come and comment properly on this piece. I had not read your work before and was so impressed with this poem, the way you are able to see beauty from so many aspect, I love ' Yet pain is deep with beauty... inside while we are bleeding' very powerful. I will follow your work!

Submitted on Sat, June 2nd, 2007 12:39am

This poem is lovely, John. The visualisation is easy and encompass in a few lines, all of our senses. I feel heat; smell the dust, see the falling sun, taste the thirst of a hard day, the tired bones which we unaware, carry heavily, I hear the crunching of many foot steps marching away, very, very good and then you place us all in this crowed of ... Read More

Submitted on Mon, May 28th, 2007 8:56pm

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