miarithegreat Activity

miarithegreat's Posted Comments

I like the mystery elements, but I feel like you should take some time to proof read it. Some of the grammar and spacing is off. Also I think you could have gone into more detail describing the rural setting and made this into a much longer story. Good job!

Submitted on Tue, July 9th, 2013 5:49pm

Woah. There are no words for how emotional and breathtaking this is. I hope you didn't personally have to go through anything like this.

Submitted on Mon, July 1st, 2013 6:18pm

I like this very much. It makes it seem like the rain if the evil one. Lol I love rain so this was a different way of thinking about it. Great personification!

Submitted on Mon, July 1st, 2013 5:54pm

View All miarithegreat's Comments →

miarithegreat's Recommended Shelf on Booksie

This is a library of postings and books that miarithegreat has read from Booksie.com.

miarithegreat's recommended Booksie Shelf is empty.

miarithegreat's Quickees


Please write below a quickee for this writer.

This is where you can leave a short message for the writer. All Quickees are public. To leave a private message, use the private messaging system.

View All miarithegreat's Quickees →

Flash Fiction Summer 2021 Writing Contest image

miarithegreat is a member of: