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My advice? Open the door, but don't tear down the walls. But maybe that's just my aged cynicism talking...? Bluntly: I like this poem, although I have to admit that I'm usually not a freak for rhyming poetry. In your case, however, I'll make an exception. This has a nice musical flow and rhythm that makes it smooth and enjoyable, but the co... Read More

Submitted on Thu, March 25th, 2010 5:47am

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Very upfront, very honest, very straight ahead. The only way to write. But. Shouldn't "all I want it you out of it" be "all I want IS you out of it"? Or is this just youthful goth/vampire slang that an old bastard like me isn't aware of? That happens a lot. Regardless, keep writing bravely.

Submitted on Mon, March 22nd, 2010 2:53am

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Been there! It's admirable the way you lay your emotions right out there, for everyone to see. Reminds me a little of some Opeth lyrics, actually. (Hope that's not an insult.) Thanks for your comment on my story, and for requesting to be a fan of my writing. Keep tapping the keys! Mister T.

Submitted on Mon, March 15th, 2010 1:40am

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