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I feel there needs to be much more to this story. What sort of betrayal on her part lead to him killing her? Did she try to kill him, which would justify it? Or did she dump him and he's just insane? I enjoy flash stories, but I don't think this idea fits that format. Maybe while he stands over her dying body, the story could flashback to clips of... Read More

Submitted on Fri, May 13th, 2016 11:34am

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Great story! I have to admit, I got a little lost the first time through so I read it a second and it all made sense. This is definitely one of the more original stories I've read on the site. I have a lot of respect for anyone who strives to write something original, and dives in 100% to accomplish it.

Submitted on Fri, May 13th, 2016 11:25am

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Haha...I went for the minimalist approach. I updated it. Not sure what happened the first time I tried to publish.

Submitted on Thu, May 12th, 2016 6:03pm

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