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Hiya. I am so sorry I didn't get back to you. I thought I had already. I have entered the story now :). But OMG!! this story was really good. First off I liked the first sentence, what a very nice and clear description. It pulled me in instantly. Then when he woke up, turns out she was a ghost! What a twist!!! A really good one, and one that I ... Read More

Submitted on Thu, February 13th, 2014 10:34pm

Oh I like it!! Exactly describes love. It kind of goes with the theme I think. I will include it with the entries :D xx

Submitted on Mon, February 10th, 2014 11:11am

This is quite interesting. You're only 11 and already this talented. Well done. Even though I liked it, I am afraid it doesn't count as a valentines day story. if you are still interested, you are still welcome to submit a different piece. Good job on this

Submitted on Tue, February 4th, 2014 1:23pm

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