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This was beautiful. I don't usually use that word to describe writing, but in this case it was. There was a tender melancholy to this piece which really touched me. As someone who's known people who've fought serious illness, I can say that the emotions in this piece felt right. It was short and bittersweet. This might be my favorite thing on Books... Read More

Submitted on Wed, August 8th, 2012 6:09am

This was an interesting read, and something I've thought about, in passing, myself. As technology advances, the way we kill each other becomes increasingly impersonal. It's kind of disturbing, in a way, that killing has become so easy and casual. A thought provoking piece, to be sure, although I might venture to say that this might be more accurate... Read More

Submitted on Wed, August 8th, 2012 5:59am

I enjoyed this story. It was very ably written; you clearly have talent. Your prose has a melodic feel, if that makes any sense. There were a few issues with spelling, but I'm not really nitpicky enough to bother you about those. I think my favorite part was the end. Don't get me wrong, the rest was good too, but that was a great way to cap thin... Read More

Submitted on Wed, August 8th, 2012 5:50am

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