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I'm sorry for you. Losing someone important is hard. You've made a beautiful, simple poem, that realtes very well to the relationship between an grandfather and his grandchild.

Submitted on Mon, November 12th, 2012 10:52am

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I'm not really a poem-person, honestly, but I liked the subject of your poem. You capture the confusio and the questions of that situation very well, but I think I saw a few typos. "My hea(r)t is confused"? and "I need to cho(o)se"? The schematics and build of your poem are very simple, but it's attractive that way, not too fancy or complicated... Read More

Submitted on Sun, November 4th, 2012 11:29pm

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I see my overpowering charm has worked, huzzah! KMU :)

Submitted on Wed, October 24th, 2012 11:02am

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