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You had commented on my prologue about this and I'm sorry it's taken so long to read/comment, but: WOW. Please please please keep my updated. You are incredibly talented!
Submitted on Sat, December 8th, 2012 3:00am
by Miranda Lee
Hi there! :) You had read the prologue to my novel "Fleeting" and asked if I'd comment so here it is: Prepare for more comments because I'm not putting this one down! :) This is awesome and so realistic and mysterious and I love it. :*
Submitted on Sat, December 8th, 2012 2:57am
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Reading request here *sigh* 1st chapter of "Moonlight Mystery" is now uploaded! It's a fantasy, mythical, romance, and suspense all in one!! Pretty please check it out and tell me what you think of it! I'll without a doubt happily return the favor!!! thanks a million in advance, XOXO
Working on "moonlight mystery" chapter 1 of my novel but my short-stories will still be posted EVERY WEEK. there are a bunch on my site already so check them out you'll love them! all of my stories/novels/short stories are mystery/dark/fantasy.. you comment on any of mine and i'll WITHOUT A DOUBT gladly return the favor!!!
Hey! can you check out my novel When The Moon Was Our Friend, its an action packed novel and i would really love some feedback on it... Thanks!
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by Omigoysh
Hmmm... I think you really need to slow this down. It's a good start; however, I think you really rushed it and you need to take everything slower and really explain things and get into some of those nitty-gritty details that make stories. Don't just from one thing to another; let the story flow. x) Other than that, it's pretty good. :)
Submitted on Thu, December 27th, 2012 7:39am