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The progression of story within your three poems is very interesting. While I have no personal knowledge of the subject, it feels accurate as to how a victim would react over the years. Again, your poems are haunting. I particularly like the last stanza in this poem. Freedom comes with a price, but the price itself can be argued about how worthy of... Read More

Submitted on Fri, May 11th, 2018 2:20pm

The opening line, “The world comes to our door” is so good. This poem drew me in from that line. I love the use of irony in this poem as well. After reading the two previous parts, it’s deliciously ironic to find a church goer trying to teach the subject motherly things and the father being protective over another boy. Your poems are haunting... Read More

Submitted on Fri, May 11th, 2018 2:15pm

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