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Keep fighting the good fight, Yuu. With enough determination, it may be possible to stop the sparkle-epidemic before its too late. Because vampires DON'T sparkle in the sun, they turn to dust. Otherwise they're NOT vampires. End of story.

Submitted on Tue, December 8th, 2009 10:55am

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I think the changing POV could get interesting, although it does make the story feel a bit choppy. Hopefully it's effectiveness later in the story will make the initial choppiness worth it. I gave it a like, if only for this line: "He hugged me, I stood there. He was stoned if he was giving me a hug." PS) Could you tell me where you got the p... Read More

Submitted on Sat, July 18th, 2009 1:39pm

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Beautifully descriptive, and charmingly poetic. I loved every word of it. My favorite part: "When she is happy black and red roses grow around her, though plain in comparison to her, they are still beautiful." Excellent work. I'm a fan. =)

Submitted on Mon, May 4th, 2009 6:28pm

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