RaisedByChimps20 Activity

Leo: i like how in this chapter you find out he has personality, hes vain, but he has personality at least and he is sorta likeable in a way already in a funny he's into him self kinda way. there is a lot of potential for his character developing. my only gripe with him was that he ended too fast and with the bear minimum of detail. nami: she ha... Read More

Submitted on Fri, August 31st, 2012 6:19am

yes yes yes. your a perfect fit for the first author of the week ;) first off, im really liking the multiple perspectives. in fact, if i ever finish my first book ive decided to make the next one with multiple perspectives. secondly, i love the vibe and the concept itself. a story like this is perfect for plot twist and first person is always aweso... Read More

Submitted on Fri, August 31st, 2012 4:32am

you were right. very short. but its very descriptive and it just seems to jump right in, which i like in a way but it seems to jump too quickly without knowing whats going on. its probably because the chapter is so short but thats really the only problem i had with it, is that it doesnt feel like a first chapter to me. thats just me tho home skille... Read More

Submitted on Sat, August 25th, 2012 9:33pm