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I felt the pain the girl is going through in this poem, I felt it so much that it hurt me to read this. I like the way you have this written out, it's not like other poems, in a good way. Good job.

Submitted on Fri, February 5th, 2016 2:59pm

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The whole smuggling thing is pretty well explained within your words, you described it perfectly. I found it funny how you had the story destination to be Las Vegas, only because I live here so I was all, "Oh, Vegas!", so it captured my attention even more at that point. Is there going to be more to this? Because I would love to read it if there is... Read More

Submitted on Fri, February 5th, 2016 2:56pm

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Woah, this whole story gives me an eerie vibe. I also love how she's talking, the way you have written this kind of a novel is brilliant. I am a sucker for horror stories so thank you for suggesting it to me. Much appreciated.

Submitted on Fri, February 5th, 2016 2:48pm

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