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I dig it!

Submitted on Thu, November 26th, 2009 7:21pm

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Oh yea, one more thing - I think the poem is great and would be even more powerful if you cut the last line because the second to last line is powerful and succinctly beautiful.

Submitted on Tue, November 24th, 2009 8:33pm

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See, I don't believe in a Judeo-Christian God so I don't have a problem with that at all. However, I do think that we have a tendency to focus on the fact that religion causes pain when I think that it's more like this - people are just assholes.

Submitted on Tue, November 24th, 2009 8:31pm

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