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The gloomy forest

Chapter 1 - The gloomy forest

Nice little short. You just need to know where to place the words sometimes. For example: 'As I walk in the gloomy and dark forest, the sunlight starts covering with cloud.' Maybe: 'As I began my walk through the darkest depths of the gloomy forest (woodland) I looked up to the sky to see the clearest of day turn into dark the blackest of clo... Read More

Submitted on Sun, July 13th, 2014 8:36pm

A Song of Revolution

Chapter 1 - A Song of Revolution

Oh, wow! *clapping hands together* You can really feel the power and story come to life before your very eyes. You speak of such views as political, social and religious. You speak such meaning of life and the crap in it that puts you down. Gripping stuff. Keep at it.

Submitted on Sat, July 5th, 2014 9:09pm

A State of Guilt

Chapter 1 - A State of Guilt

I really like how you write poems. Such power, such emotion. It pulls you right in and you can feel what is happening. More than poetry. This is a story. You really care for what is happening. Keep writing, pal. Terrific stuff!

Submitted on Sat, July 5th, 2014 9:04pm


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