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I enjoyed reading your story about the boy finding a baby canary. You include the story of the boy coming to the orphanage which seemed a good parallel to the story of the bird. I think you need to consider how to show a change in the boy's awareness as he accepts his loss of the bird. Maybe going back to his own situation and how he too will l... Read More

Submitted on Tue, June 3rd, 2014 7:51am

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I could see that dragon with your descriptions of each feature. I could feel his hot breath. And I, too, hail that they live in legends. Thank you for the imagery.

Submitted on Tue, June 3rd, 2014 7:34am

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Welcome to the sight. Glad to see another poet.

Submitted on Sat, May 24th, 2014 4:41am

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