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Hilariously dark! I like the way that you think ;)

Submitted on Sat, September 26th, 2015 4:16am

This story is just so beautifully written! Rhynne is also such a great character, I love that she doesn't take herself so seriously and brings out such a lighthearted, almost comedic feeling. The only critique I have is noticing a few typos, but that can easily be fixed by a proofread. Otherwise the story is exquisite so far!

Submitted on Wed, September 23rd, 2015 8:57am

I really like where this is going, you have got me interested in these characters. I do agree with what some other people commented, that a little more detail can always help. The way I see it, I try to remind myself while I'm writing that the reader cannot see into my own head, so it's best to explain things as clearly as I can. But you are off to... Read More

Submitted on Tue, September 22nd, 2015 4:38am

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