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Hey! Friend I've written a poem "Broken Heart And Tears".If you've time please check it out. I would love to know your opinion and will surely return the favor.

Hey :> Please have a look at my *in progress* novel Feel Guilty, VERY Guilty" Pwease? :

Have you ever sat back and wondered
what's that very first fan of mine doing
What treasure did they leave or plunder
a chance of anything new that's brewing
Just stop by to say hello
The second, third, fourth, fifth, and sixth
sharing all their laughs and every tear
Where did they wind up within the mix
of every hope and every fear
Just stop by so you'll know
With each story long or short
leaving reality for one of their own
Captains in space to kings in their court
poems and songs that grip to the bone
Just stop by to say hello
The seventh, eighth, ninth, and tenth
writing of dog fights between planes in the sky
Oh the drama, chills, thrills, and suspense
cowpokes finding shelter from a hot sun on high
Just stop by so you'll know
Heartbreaking truths of things they've lost
people, places, and things never forgotten
Families torn asunder, minds tumbled and tossed
the hardcore, nitty-gritty, the dirty, and rotten
Just stop by to say hello
The eleventh, twelfth, thirteenth and on
penning fact and fiction, or life and death
Where are they at, where have they gone
reading the comments that took their breath
Just stop by so you'll know
If they've ever sat back and wondered
what's that very first fan of theirs doing
What treasure did you leave or plunder
a chance of anything new that's brewing
Just stop by...