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Magical Desires
by A.K.Taylor
This is a good start - I like the contrasting atmospheres at the beginning: the panicked horror of the dream/nightmare vs the sibling pranks made for an interesting mixture of moods. The dynamic between them is very realistic (speaking as someone who has a brother and who has been doused in liquids other than water, thanks to him) and entertaining,... Read More
Submitted on Fri, October 23rd, 2020 11:03am
Weight of the Heart
This is a really good start - your descriptions are well written and set the scene perfectly. I like that you introduced the character by having him talk to an elderly woman - it showed a different side to him that made his intentions in going to the feast even more shocking and dramatic. The bit about him "nervously" holding his breath showed a di... Read More
Submitted on Fri, October 23rd, 2020 10:16am
Bloodlands
Chapter 2 - The Man in the Duckbill Cap
by Needless
I like the changing POVs - the omnipresent narrative is working well and is great for getting an insight into each of the character's thoughts on what's happening (especially at the end, when we heard the thoughts of both Wei and Amanda, and then the dialogue from the rest of them chiming in). It's a hard narrative to pull off as it can be quite me... Read More
Submitted on Thu, October 22nd, 2020 6:08pm
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20 wordsFriday, August 25th, 2023 11:23amHello there. I am wondering if you could read my latest story called My Marsupial Granddaughters. That would be awesome.
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