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Filled with emotion. :) An incredible read. The style was different but not very difficult. Well done, for sure. I might make one suggestion, though. Is there a particular reason why you centered the text? It was sometimes difficult to follow the lines because of that particular difference. I absolutely loved it. :) This was a terrific... Read More

Submitted on Wed, June 30th, 2010 8:40pm

This is great by connecting to the audience. Like Charlotte Bog said, everyone feels like that sometimes, some more than others. It starts off very personal in the first line, then it loses its flow. Some imagery would really make this memorable. One tiny grammar mistake. Should be "that one everyone USED to know". This was enjoyable.... Read More

Submitted on Sun, May 23rd, 2010 5:00pm

A wonderful proclamation of freedom. It gives me the feeling that you have more to say with this piece, though. It's about freedom, why not go crazy with it, expand and show us what you've got? Just one grammar mistake. It should be "just not TOO tight". You use "to" when referring TO something. "Too" is having TOO much of something. :) ... Read More

Submitted on Sun, May 23rd, 2010 4:55pm

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