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Hey, Read your poem rewind. Must say it upfront though I'm mostly a writer of novels and short stories and don't umderstand poems at depth. With that said I really liked your poem. Well written, heartfelt, and quite filled with substance. The best part was the twist ending. That the longing back in time can distort the moment of now. It came... Read More

Submitted on Wed, January 2nd, 2019 10:37am

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Another thing just hit me and this is something I have had to work on myself in many writing projects. And that is that I think you would have very much to gain by developing your story in a more "sense of realism" way. With this I mean that the main character gets the opportunity for a review of her talents very fast. But one thing I ask myself is... Read More

Submitted on Sun, November 4th, 2018 9:14am

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I just felt I had to develop my concept of "Show Don't Tell" a little bit more. I think what is the problem with more rigid storytelling with clear ideas is that one can lose the sense of mystery a bit. To write more with subtle details builds mystery to greater effect. You always have good ideas but you present them in a bit to rigid ways. One can... Read More

Submitted on Sun, November 4th, 2018 8:47am

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