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Again, another great chapter. I was a little disappointed that there were not a lot of details describing the characters, but that could just be because I am very visual when I am reading. I try to picture everything. Overall, the detail of the camp was great. Also, I would watch with your tenses. You tend to mix them up and this can sometimes conf... Read More

Submitted on Thu, July 14th, 2016 4:15pm

I'm so glad that you happened across my page and recommended your story. I find it very intriguing. I am curious as to what happened to them, what impacted their trip. I also love the amount of detail that you go into. It makes the story informative but not overwhelming. I am curious as to how their trips began in the different towns. It feels kind... Read More

Submitted on Thu, July 14th, 2016 4:08pm

This was a very powerful piece. I feel like it spoke volumes to the society that we live in now. It was also very well written and detailed. Great job.

Submitted on Thu, July 14th, 2016 4:02pm

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