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by krisha
Hey, beautifully done...this one too. Learnt new things. However the rhyme scheme, I felt was a little broken. The best part of a poem is definitely the imagination and the message...and I have already in love with your imagination.
Submitted on Mon, August 8th, 2011 9:20am
by krisha
Just too good... I want to say..."Read my writings too when you get the time"...but I wont...as they are nowhere as good as yours...so I would rather say..."Keep it up"!!! The Forgiven
Submitted on Wed, August 3rd, 2011 4:49pm
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hey! thankx for ur comment! 8 chapters already up! will continue asap! :)
hey! if you can, please check up my novel, "will you promise me?" and do leave ur comments. thank you! :)
hey! how r u? :) have posted a new poem 'Resuscitation'. Please go through it and leave your comment if you like it. Have a nice day!
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by punni29
The story is beautiful...and I loved it... if this comes form one of your personal experiences...then I would say you are lucky...at least you had a friend by your side..not everyone is that lucky...Anyway...I 'll be waiting for the continuation..please...do let me know when you write it..
Submitted on Tue, August 9th, 2011 12:11pm