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The story is beautiful...and I loved it... if this comes form one of your personal experiences...then I would say you are lucky...at least you had a friend by your side..not everyone is that lucky...Anyway...I 'll be waiting for the continuation..please...do let me know when you write it..

Submitted on Tue, August 9th, 2011 12:11pm

Hey, beautifully done...this one too. Learnt new things. However the rhyme scheme, I felt was a little broken. The best part of a poem is definitely the imagination and the message...and I have already in love with your imagination.

Submitted on Mon, August 8th, 2011 9:20am

Just too good... I want to say..."Read my writings too when you get the time"...but I wont...as they are nowhere as good as yours...so I would rather say..."Keep it up"!!! The Forgiven

Submitted on Wed, August 3rd, 2011 4:49pm

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