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Sorry, this is a long comment. Here are a couple things that I’m talking about, and in the end these are just my opinions. The only other problems, to me, would be little words that go along with proper English, like the usage of the word “had,” and stuff like that, but you did a good job writing, nonetheless. “After flicking it in the ... Read More

Submitted on Tue, July 6th, 2010 1:50pm

Great response to the "fairy" comment, by the way, and I wanted to say that like thought your story was really good, over all.

Submitted on Tue, July 6th, 2010 1:08am

Ok, I think you need to learn how to have fun with your words. Go and read anyone of your favorite, published authors and count how run-on-sentences they use for a single paragraph. Like I said before I like your word choices, but I don't like your sentence structures, though, they made me lose focus. I was actually about to stop and finish later b... Read More

Submitted on Tue, July 6th, 2010 1:02am

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