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Well done! I indeed do like the profound statement, "Only Pinocchio knows why." Correct me if I am wrong, but are you implying that since Pinocchio is a puppet,and "she" is pulling the strings in the way things are done? Was the reference to Pinocchio to imply that he had a first hand experience that involved "she?" Your implications all point to t... Read More

Submitted on Wed, October 22nd, 2014 6:44pm

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I indeed enjoyed this piece, however may I add some constructive criticism? I enjoy how the introduction is compelling yet still sticks to the topic. I believe the introduction needs that wonderful transition that you were able to accomplish. Consequently, I believe the ending leads me to be disoriented and confused. What was the motivating trigger... Read More

Submitted on Wed, October 22nd, 2014 6:24pm

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Very interesting, however a few minor mistakes here and there. Keep up the good work! :) ~Tori Petunia

Submitted on Thu, June 19th, 2014 12:35pm

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