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the site is looking good. I'm curious about how long the upgrades are going to take? The changes make it look professional. Good job!

Submitted on Fri, September 28th, 2007 4:05pm

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Your poem has a lot of promise. I suggest double checking your spelling though. It takes away from the flow of it. Also deleting the extra spacing between lines interrupts the flow. As for the overall message; I think this is a good love poem with good imagery. I like the word choices and the way you express the emotions. Well done.

Submitted on Sun, July 15th, 2007 2:29am

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you have a possibility for a pretty good story here, but there's nothing to it. it's got no depth to it. expand on what you have, add details about the character, the history of the killer, how they know who it was that took her. Don't be afraid of details it'll really hit out your story. Good luck. If you expand on this let me know somehow I'd lik... Read More

Submitted on Sun, July 1st, 2007 6:10pm

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