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First of I want to give you a great round of applause. Even though your first language is not English, I feel your writing is remarkable probably better than some people that have used English their entire lives. Secondly, you have a gift for creating mystery and suspense. You didn't give everything about "the Touch" right away as some do have the ... Read More

Submitted on Wed, September 14th, 2016 10:00am

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OK give me a moment to catch my breath and calm my quick beating heart. That was intense!!! I didn't really see any grammatical issues but I will leave the grammar to those better than I. I will just give a review based on how, I, the reader enjoyed your storytelling. Personally, I loved how this chapter opened with a sweet moment between Jackson a... Read More

Submitted on Wed, September 14th, 2016 9:33am

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Vampires are a hot subject for a lot of writers. Sometimes when you read one vampire story, you've read them all, but this is quite refreshing. The heroine isn't some damsel in distress and knows how to kick ass. Personally I would have withheld the guy's name in the first paragraph to make it a little bit of a mystery...but still it was an enjoyab... Read More

Submitted on Tue, September 13th, 2016 2:20pm

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