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by Pail
Oh wow. You've definitely made this all very convincing. Meaning, even though the whole idea is ridiculous, I believe it. I don't feel it is corny, or I don't believe it to be entirely false and completely insane. This piece was very... eerie. How calm she is, when she's admitting that she will be killed, along with her disregard for her pare... Read More
Submitted on Fri, January 30th, 2009 6:19pm
by Pail
... That was actually very, VERY good, Pail. It kept me interested all the way through, somewhat disgusted me here and there, but overall, it impressed me. Definitely better than Chapter 1. If the following installments in "the (lost) letters from home" are as good, then you will have a great piece of work before us. :P You've made a fan out ... Read More
Submitted on Thu, January 29th, 2009 6:56pm
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Hello!
I would be happy if you could check out my new poems....
"A walk in the rain"
"Silent river"
"Murmur of love"
please do comment I want to know your opinion. Thank you.
welcome to read my new short story " into the jungle" expecting suggestions/critic or comment.
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T-Day: The Lost Letters From Home Letter #1 - Chapter 4 - Sayont's Letter
by Pail
Aha, this is becoming more and more interesting by the letter. (: Excellent plot development. I found it interesting that their only method of contacting one another is via letter, as if they're restricted to this method alone. I'm interested in seeing what happens with Timmy's sister; to see what sort of role she plays and whatnot. Also, the do... Read More
Submitted on Wed, February 4th, 2009 6:55pm