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hmm...it felt very cute. I like the detail and how it was used. There isn't too much or too little. You get a good feel for who the characters are and stuff. I really like it

Submitted on Sat, November 3rd, 2018 1:40pm

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Once again, the conversations are very short and too the point. It's as if you're yelling "this is my trope!" instead of implying it as time goes on and having to learn the characters. It's a stretch to say this but, it's not the most natural way to communicate. While she is blunt, he can dance around the topic and drag out the conversation with he... Read More

Submitted on Sun, October 21st, 2018 11:33am

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Okay, a introductory chapter. One that seems very fast paced in how they don't really dwell on any topic. They only say what is needed and move on. That's not a bad thing, but it doesn't say enough about the characters and their personalities in my opinion. Just the basics, but of course, we'll learn more about everyone as things go on

Submitted on Sun, October 21st, 2018 11:25am

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