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You have strong poetry and images, nice work.

Submitted on Tue, November 26th, 2013 9:52am

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Your writing seems solid, and you seem to know where you're going. However, this beginning chapter seems overly emotional to me, and the repeated descriptions of "sad," "tired," "blank," "facedown" seem unnecessarily heavy after the first few paragraphs. For me, this would be a case of "less is more." I'd like to see a better balance of sadness and... Read More

Submitted on Tue, November 26th, 2013 9:18am

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So I just logged on for the first time in forever and saw your note. Thanks so much for including the Holmes Hunters story, I really appreciate it. If you haven't left a review (I haven't checked yet) please do. I'd love to hear what you liked and what you didn't.

Submitted on Tue, November 26th, 2013 9:01am

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