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Twilight : Inverted Eclipse

Chapter 1 - Twilight : Inverted Eclipse

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Upon re-reading this review for the first time in what seems like years, I want to apologize for sounding very much like a novice first year writing student. I have done little more than unimaginatively state the obvious. Of course Twilight has never and will never be regarded as a work of literature or art. Hahaha, it strikes me as a little hilari... Read More

Submitted on Sat, February 26th, 2011 10:22pm


Chapter 2 - MWM

More good poetry. I love how you set the poem up to be an archetypal romance and then twist it around with the contrast you create in the last two lines. My only criticism would be that the main body seems a little too repetitive: I.E. you seem to be expressing sentiments that either restate or reinforce those that you have already conveyed. ... Read More

Submitted on Fri, February 18th, 2011 9:20pm


Chapter 1 - Poetry.

This is great poetry. I love the subtlety and ambiguity, the way you elegantly wrap meaning up in the folds of metaphor and personification. Very effective use of the free-verse form and a very strong ending. I'm surprised I have never come across your work before and plan to read more of it when I get the chance. :)

Submitted on Fri, February 18th, 2011 9:14pm

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